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Friday, July 08, 2011

Two in a tandem #9

 

the cool morning breeze
played with the curtains

made them dance
in summer’s sunrise colours

promising another golden day
to spend at the beach

she lay in her bed
just for one more minute

or maybe two

thinking
that the windows needed cleaning

 

The ever brilliant Jinksy provided yet another work of art to inspire us.

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7 comments:

  1. Jinksy8 July 2011 at 20:36

    Or maybe her spectacles? LOL ♥

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  2. Susannah8 July 2011 at 21:33

    That is wonderful!. ..and I identify with the final line too. ;-)

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  3. pam8 July 2011 at 22:43

    Fabulous!

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  4. Mara9 July 2011 at 11:00

    Ah yes, I know the feeling. But the next day I will feel the same, because I hate window cleaning!

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  5. jabblog9 July 2011 at 15:18

    Mundane thoughts tend to intrude at such times - tiresome, isn't it;-)

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  6. allhorsestuff9 July 2011 at 17:25

    You know, if you wrote those thoughtful and delightful words. On a small card...with her painting.ge..they'd sell like hotcakes!
    You really have a knack for inspirational writing as you view her works!

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  7. Marja10 July 2011 at 02:24

    I love your poetry
    "made them dance in summer's sunrise coulours" is just beautiful and then in the end back with two feet back in reality

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